Tell me what I should do
Tell me what I should feel
To let go is too painful
To go on is impossible
I wear this white dress
The one I dreampt of since I was little
Yet I am alone here
Lying in this meadow
The sun knows what to do
To rise and set each day
Why can’t I feel such ease
To know whether to go or stay?
A contest entry
- Double Prompt q u i c k i e by Kathraina.
650 points, ended July 6, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great job with this piece, the emotions here feel real.
Bravo
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It is a difficult thing to know what our station is in life, it is filled with uncertainties and well the need to keep moving, keep altering state for the sake of not becoming stagnant and feeling like waste.
I like it, I like it so!
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Thank you for your comment. I know we need to move on, but sometimes it feels impossible to do so. We become so mired in what we "know to be true" we stop seeking the truth.
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I loved the last stanza especially.
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I liked your's too Jenny. The "daisy" petal reference especially. I read your peom and then saw the contest and thought it looked neat.
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