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Dare

How dare he come here? Here to my place?
To my hole, my one home left?
The place where I fled him so long ago?
His stupid lies, their stupid rules
Enough tears have I shed for him
He will pay, his blood shall paint these stone walls
And I will see if it is as red as mine
Then I will find the others, and make them pay
And when they are gone, the world empty,
I will be at home, with mother moon and stars again

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  • annother gold member
    July 20
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    Great write, awesome imagery. Best of luck.


  • skycries
    July 5

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    Oh wow, I must say that it is a powerful poem in my eyes. I can feel the anger emiting from this poem. The first two lines I could relate. Very good job ^^