So I'm sitting here
trying to figure out
what I should do now
It ended somehow
and I ended up waiting
but I don't know how
to sit here and wait
'Cause it doesn't matter now
and the year's long over
what good would it do
to say I miss your laughter?
I wish I could tell you
all the things I feel
but I won't break your heart
to tell you things that don't matter
I still don't know
what I'm doing here
bored out of my mind
'Cause it's over now
and all that's left is waiting
but I don't know how
to sit here and wait
But it doesn't matter now
and the year's long over
what good would it do
to say I miss your laughter?
I wish I could tell you
all the things I feel
but I won't break your heart
to tell you things that don't matter
No I won't break my heart
to tell you things that don't matter
Do you think this would make a good song?
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woah painting buddy...this is awesoume! I can feel the emotion, it makes me heart ache. I love how you can write and make the experiances so real even if you haven't experianced them. (if this is about someone I expect you to tell me now hahaha).
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goose pimples
This is so moving,it almost came alive and jumped off the lap top screen.Whether it would make a good song is not a subject I am keyed up enough on to make any valid comment,but I expect if the music to go along side it was composed well and the singer sang with passion,then I guess it would sound fine.Liking the two lines that are written as questions,it makes them real and captures the essence of the piece amazingly well.I like this,deep thoughtfully structured work.It is worthy of being read by many.10/10. I loved it. -
yes, I think this would make a good song but I'd have to hear it to music first to actually make that judgement. But I think this would work well as lyrics.
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wha my painting buddy is this a love poem?
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I know, gasp. And it's a song, not a poem. It's actually not completely about love either, but it's always open to interpretation.
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A song? (gasp) I love songs! Is there any chance this is on youtube or something? I would love to hear the actual music for it... on a poetic note, this is wonderful, and I love the fact that you left it open for interpretation.
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Would defo make a good song!!!.....
quite a heart filled poem there.......
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nice. a love poem that makes sence:=)
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