I sit down and watch you sleep
i see your favorite perfume
something i know i cannot keep
but without this i cant keep track of your scent
i love you
I'm sorry but this is something i have to do
i can no longer stay
there is no possible way
the pain i go through every day
so as i leave you tonight
a kiss on your cheek goodbye
that's is close as ill ever get.
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welcome to allpoetry
I really liked this, the emotion that is player out in this is one that I know in my heart, well done on this and thanks for sharing this with us here, please keep up the writing!
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Welcome to Allpoetry
This is really intriguing. Your words show how hard it can be to try and hold on but to know you have to let someone go...
I'd suggest capitalising the letter 'i' and using some punctuation
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