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Love At 1st Sight

Here we are, staring in each other's eyes
It's a beautiful night, what a surprise
You lean in for a kiss but I turn away and giggle
Butterflies in my stomach how much taht really tickles
There's an awkward moment that dreads upon us

But this night was a sure plus

Hormones are raging and we're still gazing

With a simple touch of his lips is where we met

There I was not without of breath

Drowned in the was his love I can not bear

Is as small as the touch of his hair

With the softest lips that I have ever kissed

Will be the ones that I surely missed

He takes my hand in his yet again

And tells me that he is no longer my friend

For now I'm his gurl and he's my man

And the love we have is rising again

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