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breakdown


 

Always high

or burning

empty.

 

You reach

my love

in solitude.

 

I inhale

your noxious

fumes then

gag.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • crivanea silver member
    July 5

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    very nice write! Congrat on the gold.. Much said in few words... U give a story of perspective ... Intersting write indeed!


  • ladybug.
    July 5

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    Gorgeously done ♥ you said so much in so few words -- I love it. Good job & good luck my dear.