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something beautiful

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Her hazy silhouette radiates in the sunlight
through a burst of efflorescence,
rays streaming down like strings of a marionette
moving her with grace.

She tells stories of intrigue and beauty,
as delicate as flower petals
drenched in warm fragrant tones
while balancing on bare toes.

She is art
and he, that she thinks about while dancing…
is her song.

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt- http://s265.photobucket.com/albums/ii237/Poeticlydarkgirl/?action=view¤t=dancing-1.jpg

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  • Rick Weston silver member
    September 9

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    i do believe you attain a measure of perfection in this poem. i love every word and line contained. stunning!


  • katie marie silver member
    September 1
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    "She is art and he...is her song." Wonderful ending.


  • Raining Kisses silver member
    August 2

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    I love this, its so beautifully sculpted, wonderful choice of delicate language
    last stanza just seals it like a wax seal on a love note
    bravo
    T


  • Dryad Enya
    July 29

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    Heart breaking, why waste time reading an amatures work when wonders unknown await us here? I can easily say on a normal day this would be the best read i would come across however i have just read a poem in latin which is purely terrifyingly amazing, this will be the best poem i have read in the past month written in english.

    The picture only aids in delight, the numerous joys drowning me bring laughter to our deprived lungs as we watch this gracful queen entake life as it flows her way. 'Dancing is an art proformed only by those who are ready to dance away their fears'

    Perfectly written and no mistakes.
    Best write in a European langauage to date!
    Gorecki.


  • Tzipora
    July 17
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    beyond stunning. the colors the picture, especially the write.

    beautiful write...


  • awannabepoet
    July 15

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    A song surely such a young and tender heart does carry at the tips of her toes for in them there is the strength of rebirth and the carefree step of a young heart that does glow.


  • Edi-mae
    July 13

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    stunning

    I absolutely adore the image you have put with these beautiful words.... you have captured the imagery in your words perfectly complimenting the image. stunning work


  • Hope Angel silver member
    July 11

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    This is beautiful loved the way you ended. Thank you for entering have a nice day


  • SteveS gold member
    July 6
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    Beautiful! Really great with the prompt.


  • glenn shannon silver member
    July 6
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    simply devine how sweet to think of her man as she dances lovely work


  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    July 5

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    damn, this is so good. that last stanza....breathtaking. i predict this poem does well in the contest it is for... as i cannot imagine a more perfect poem for that prompt.


  • rainbows. gold member
    July 5
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    Wow. =o

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