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Emotionless

Mask of no emotions
cover my tear dyed complexion
alter my face into a blank page
double check no one can read my thoughts

Mask of no emotions
you're cutting into my flesh
as you take over my mind, body, and soul
i feel myself growing more unknown

Mask of no emotions
i can no longer bare to breathe
every gasp for air beats at my chest
i'm sinking deeper into colorless humanity

Mask of no emotions
your porcelain facade is chipping
i'm clawing at your exterior
break away from my bloody veins

Mask of no emotions
all this time you brought me pain
when i rather would have whispered to him
"I Love You"

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  • I CAN'T DECIDE WETHER I LIKE OR DISLIKE THE WAY YOU REPEATED "MASK OF NO EMOTIONS"

    THE LAST LINE IS A LITTLR JARRING, BUT IT'S A GOOD WRITE!

  • This is brilliant and really well written. Excellent and i really loved it. Amazing!

  • omg you are so amazing and you are only a year older than me how do you do it


  • xXMe17xX
    July 5
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    for a 15 year old you rock. such great words and all x

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