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The Fiend

The Fiend

They tell me that The Fiend is everywhere
The soil, water; in the very air;
In each and every single one of you.
He watches me no matter what I do!
He sends His knockers to my private door.
He's had them stop me on the street before.
I get His propaganda in the mail
And on my TV too.  It's getting stale.
On weekends when I like to laze around
He rings His bells; that awful clanging sound.
I think He reads me; dare not speak His name,
But you know who The Fiend is just the same.

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  • Ellis gold member
    July 20

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    Peter Rabbit? -- No. The Tooth Fairy? -- No. The Cookie Monster on dope. That's who it is!

    Tiki Cat

  • Intresting write my friend.I like how you talk about the fiend without telling who he is.Great job and good luck in my contest.