Sanctuary blazoned with scars
upon deadened flesh
as the razors bite into earth's being
and strive to take frivolous tendencies.
Author notes
Prompt:
the wilderness.
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soo....whats your honest opinion?
Comments
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A nice take on dark angst. The imagery is great, but it could have been better. Scares, flesh, razors... a little clichéd if you ask me. Maybe you could have used more strong words like "blazoned". Thanks for entering!
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Wow =o so much said in so few words. So much imagery. Good job & good luck ♥
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