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Ethics(a Cento)

To the girl in the third row,
you were a universal reaction-
I am a work in progress.

Secrets were never meant for keeping-
Consider
Situational Ethics.

Let's pretend I matter.

A contest entry

Meh.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • rainbows. gold member
    July 5
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    This is actually pretty good. I like it.


  • J. M. Spenser
    July 5

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    This was good! Now just to let you know I'm not one to judge fairly, poorly, or even commonsensical. (OMGosh! Who knew that was even a word!)

    Anyway....

    If you thought this was a barrel of crap I think otherwise. Because well... I believe all my poems to be barrels of much less.

    I for honesty and stupidity don't know a thing about real poetry....like anyone else does too. lol

    What was the point of this???


    I dunno...


    But this was good. So thank you for entering my contest and all the best.