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Gracias, Luna Bella


"¡Madre!" She called to the moon in its entirety.
    A tear splashed large like rain,
        showering her with healing shimmer.
 

Author notes

prompt: Write about the moon in three lines

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  • Bruce silver member
    October 20
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    Ohhhhh! The last line is brilliant!


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    July 6

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    The last line is my favorite!! I want to be showered with healing shimmer! Nice write, thanks for entering, and good luck in my contest!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker Who Lost All


  • DolceVito gold member
    July 5
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    Beautiful; that's amore. Bien hecho


  • John Faulkner
    July 5

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    OK...How do you do such a magnificent job in only three lines. WOW; you did it. Teach me your ability to present this as you have.
    I thank you ..Good luck