Look into these eyes, what do you see?
Darkness, loneliness,and treachery.
The eyes of a girl all alone
but sadly her true feelings will never be shown.
She hides from the world, to no longer get hurt
she won't let them see the scars
that make her feel like dirt.
A contest entry
- Give Me Dark Poems! by LonelyAngel.
550 points, ended July 14, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark Picture Prompt - 18 years old and under ONLY by annother.
700 points, ended July 20, 13 entries
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400 points, ended August 4, 452 entries
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Comments
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This does NOT meet the criteria for the contest- it is too emo, and it is not at least 10 lines. I will disqualify this.
-cassidy -
a good write, thank you for entering!
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Very emotional write. Well done. Best of luck.
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Aww such angst you can almost taste it. Wonderful write! Good luck in the contests!
Cyb -
I enjoyed reading this poem, you have put alot into a small piece, But I wanted it to go on for a bit longer. The length does not really matter as I am marking the actuall poem and any longr may have ruined this piece. It is touching and complex yet so so easy to read and understand.
Overall a good write.
Well done, keep writing.
xYx
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