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Howling, Wails the Barren Hyena

starving
wolverines wail
climbing the spine
of winter's wasteland
wrecklessly abandoning shelter
to suck empty womb of  dying hyena

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Prompt: the wilderness

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  • pineapple-eyes gold member
    July 5

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    I really like this, not sure why but I do. I would just say for me personally I would of left the "a" out of the last line. Think it flows better with the theme.


  • ladybug.
    July 5
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    Good interpretation of the prompt :] good luck ♥