So soft and gently he whispers that Im his only one
But he doesn't see what lies ahead, that there is more in life to come
Beautys from far and wide, with much more grace to offer
But when I speak these solemn words, he only whispers softer
He doesn't see the worry, the sadness, or the fear
He doesn't see the passion I feel when only he is near
What's missed is all the nightmares, and demons from my past
The sick and sadistic voice that says good things will never last
Skipping over the sad little girl and turning to the alleged women
I want to reach out and cry for help, but these things I cannot show him
How does one speak words that have never before been spoken
How can I believe promises which have only before been broken
Do I risk opening up the heart Ive kept locked away forever?
Or do I hide my true feelings away and loose my true love altogether...
Author notes
Like I said, this is the first poem I have writen in almost two years, don't be afraid to be honest.
A contest entry
- Only rhyme, Use one of my titles :] by Ami.
550 points, ended July 7, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
First poem I have written in almost two years, be honest and tell me what you think!
Comments
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Amazing write and honestly wow really good for the first you wrote in two years! also I can really relate to this write great take on the title
Thank you so much for entering my contest
And Good luck!
-♥Amy♥
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Something solemn and smooth, it's good to read this piece of art of yours after a long long...long time. It's nicely written and inspires to read again and again. I think AP had been missing this style for 2 years. Thanks for the come back n with this style.
Aun Ali
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