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sweet smell of deceit

I believed every word
You sold me
I believed every kiss,You faked ...

You murdered my heart
with your bloody hatchet of deceit
I felt the sharp blade tearing me apart
I felt you gouging out my vessils,
You seen agonizing tears burning my face
but still you carried on
Mutating my mind and body ...




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  • annother gold member
    July 20

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    Outstanding imagery in this write, you are very talented. Best of luck.