beauty is not words that chill
or warm hearts still frozen
and nor is beauty the act
of giving roses on valentines day
beauty is thy heart
beauty is not the way a dancer moves
or a painter paints, an artists creates
nor can it ever be a kiss
left on the cheek of ever parting lovers
yet beauty is thy eyes
beauty can never be the words chosen
by a writer to define a complex word
nor can it ever be a smile
hiding a pain that runs deeper than the ocean
alas, thou art beauty
thy smile transfixes demons
paralyses them with fearful love
thy heart melts ice
yet freezes it too
thou art beauty, my love
and that beauty is eternal
just like our love
Author notes
another little contest piece.
In a list
A contest entry
- something beautiful by pineapple-eyes.
550 points, ended July 5, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
1 - 11 of 11
-
Nothing left to say that hasnt already been sadi except I Love You. Only I can say that.
-kisses your cheek- Love ya bunches babe. I am forever yours.
-
-
-blush- i love you too, for longer than forever i belong to you.
-
-
It's like some sort of modern shakesperean poem. I say that simply because it remnds me of the whole intensity of the emotion conveyed but without just bawling all over the place like and idiot.
Nice piece
-
-
i feel special now...
thanks hon ^_^
-
-
that was so beautifully written, the last stanza was really touching, a wonderful poem
-
-
thank you ever so much ^_^
-
-
once again , a truly beautiful peice that touched my heart so many times over. and the way you paint a image into the mind is amazing. great work ^^
-
-
thank you ^_^
and be sure to post, so i can return the favor.
-
-
oh my gosh. took my breath away
so pretty and beautiful
good luck in the contest
-
-
do i get the feeling you like my work? lol!
many thankies. -
-
i hope you get that feeling becuase i do
your welcome a hundred times over
-
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 11 of 11
