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Happy Independance Day

Freedom felt in the firework blasts
Sparks slipping down the sky
Dropping down, down to the ground
Children sqealing at the sound
Illuminated the dead by the firelight spread
While God is looking and
Some still can't find
Their way they're blind
their world is burning down

-Andi

Author notes

This is partly about God and religion and partly about Independance Day.

-Andi

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