woodlands, around two bends
woodlands, around two bends
i prefer
it's all to slow for her
and we'll lay another brick down,
this cold stone becomes the ground
pick up the pace babe, faster
just be sure we're getting somewhere
valleys, hill, ozark spills
valleys, hills, ozark spills
i prefer
but its all too slow for her
What did you think
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Welcome to Allpoetry
It's all about pace or so the poem tells.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Be Well and enjoy Allpoetry.
Mark -
Welcome to AllPoetry!
This is an interesting poem - I really like the repetition here, I think it is really effective
great imagery and rhythm I think you are off to a wonderful start here!
Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!
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