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Modern Babylon

woodlands, around two bends
woodlands, around two bends
i prefer
it's all to slow for her

and we'll lay another brick down,
this cold stone becomes the ground
pick up the pace babe, faster
just be sure we're getting somewhere

valleys, hill, ozark spills
valleys, hills, ozark spills
i prefer
but its all too slow for her

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  • Cerulean Sunrise
    July 7

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    It's all about pace or so the poem tells.
    Thanks for sharing this with us.

    Be Well and enjoy Allpoetry.

    Mark


  • Polaja Greeters member
    July 6
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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This is an interesting poem - I really like the repetition here, I think it is really effective great imagery and rhythm I think you are off to a wonderful start here!

    Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!


    Polly
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