can she hear their screams for help
or does she not want to listen?
the moon shining bright onto dried tears
makes way for pretty fears
a monumental shadow casted over
brightly lit cities at night
still she mourns the day
the hour when she rises
can she cope with their wails of pain?
will she block them will walls of rain?
Author notes
just a little contest piece ^_^
In a list
A contest entry
- Dark Picture Prompt - 18 years old and under ONLY by annother.
700 points, ended July 20, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great imagery, I really liked this write a lot. Best of luck.
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awh thankies. and thanks for the hm!
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wow love it
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thank you.
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really nice and inspirational! i wouldnt expect any less from a great poet , keep up the good work ^^
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awh damn you'll make me blush!
thanks ever so much.
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hehe spider man background
anyway. the poem
"a monumental shadow casted over
brightly lit cities at night" love thoose lines
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all changed! lol
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ooooh thats so purdy!
welcomes
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