The diffrence between
My brother and i
Is i am a girl
and he is a guy
I am 17 going on 18
He is 19 going on 20
Hes older i know
but what can i say?
its unfair he does nothing
while i slave all day
To my mum im the screw up
The worst of us all
I one to scream at
Just to watch me fall
Her son is Golden
What more can i say?
He would get away with murder
oh yay!
I dont say she hates me
But dislikes me for sure
Why eles would she make me
Do all of the chores?
Author notes
Ok so imf ed up o fmy mum treating my brother liek he is Mr Perfect! he really isint.
he dosnt pull his weight around here. he dosnt have a job. he sleeps ALL day.
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sad
well thats really bad , boy or girl both deserve the same love and attention from their parents.
This is really unfair that your mother treats you in this way.
Well this poem is very well expressed.
keep writing
Stay happy
Lucky -
I can relate to this piece soooo much and i know how you feel. This is a powerful piece which says alot and has alot of power and emotion. I do really like this. Great write, keep scribbling.
I hope things look up for you, and just to say i love the name. Great write again
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This is a very powerful write, it is SOOO relatable, my younger sister is the little angel of my family, she can't do wrong in my parents' eyes. Its a pain, I know, and you have delivered the raw emotion of how unfair, and how infuriating and frustrating it can be to have the weight of the world on you. Hang in there hun, things get easier as time goes on!
~Chanel Renee'
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wow.
i really like this i know exactly what your talking about baby girl ^^
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This is a great poem and speaks the way you feel and more than likely the same is in other families. You have only a few punc. errors:"its unfair" should be "it's unfair" "Hes older" should be "He's older" You need to look over tgis your as you have lots of possessives in it. All in all you speak the truth. I know for I see it in other familues. Seems like the older brother gets away with all. Now I have a younger brother who never lifted a finger to help around the house. That was years ago when we were kids. It still pisses me off when I think about it, Go with your poem Liz, correct what you know how. THere are many AP members who will help. Take care it i sgood you got this off your chest. Papagallo
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