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Heatwave distractions

When the temperature's soaring
And the pace of life is boring
Why not try some happy stripping
Then a run to skinny dipping
Find a friend who's over heated
And get comfortably seated
Playing Mums and Dads or lovers
In a game not under covers
When your mood has reached its rudest
Just pretend that you're a nudist
Have a walk through any city
In the nude if you are pretty
Find an ice cream and then spread it
On your body, now I've said it
Then ask friends to come a licking
Before everything starts sticking
All this rather naughty fooling
Isn't likely to be cooling
But at least such sexy acting
Will be happily distracting
Until weathers not so baking
You'll enjoy yourself by making
Everybody who is near you
Either envy you or fear you
And its bound to be much better
Than the ideas in this letter!



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  • Macsword
    July 7

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    SMAO


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    July 7

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    And all of this in the middle of Peckham Rye!

    And only you could get away with rhyming rudest and nudist!

  • black is black
    July 6

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    Lol well I still don't understand what female rhymes are but this was too funny so that's okay haha. For this line... "Then asks friends to come a licking" did you mean for it to be asks instead of ask? As always great writing

  • Purrsanthema
    July 6

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    I love those two words especially: "happily distracting"! You people and your understated comments! how delightfully funny!


  • DolceVito gold member
    July 6
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    LMAO Outstanding (feminine)poesy, excellent rhyme and flow(flow?) Beautifully done


  • DolceVito gold member
    July 6

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    LMAO Outstanding (feminine)poesy, excellent rhyme and flow(flow?) Beautifully done


  • Amera gold member
    July 5

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    LOL, my dear friend? Feminine rhyming does not mean you must be naked.
    "Find a friend who's over heated"
    I think I found that friend in you dear sir.

    Love,
    Amera


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    July 5

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    I see, and humor?

    Intersting. Thank you for the trip of pleasure.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Passions


  • Ez Writer silver member
    July 5

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    Ahh , delightful feminine rhyming
    The flow 'tis awe inspiring !
    Thank you for sharing ,
    a splendid read thank you !!
    Best regards , Friend Easy

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