T he word of The Creator that
H e gave to combat
E vil that comes in a format that
B etrays and deceives the
I gnorant in ways of the thief
B ound to destroy all belief and
L ove of the Eternal Who
E ventually will vanquish and do all He said He would do!
Author notes
Joh 5:24 Verily, verily, I say unto you, He that heareth My word, and believeth on Him that sent Me, hath everlasting life, and shall not come into condemnation; but is passed from death unto life.
Joh 17:17 Sanctify them through Thy truth: Thy word is truth.
Ps 119:142 Thy righteousness is an everlasting righteousness, and Thy law is the truth.
A contest entry
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Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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Beautifully Written!
Short and sweet and to the point. I couldn't have done a better job myself. Thanks for entering my contest!! Good Luck!!
~Gin
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So happy
to hear you enjoyed this write! Thanks for your encouraging words.
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You are doing a remarkable job! I have great respect for those who place verse in author notes to accompany their writes as a back up to what has been written. It not only substantiates the write but helps those who are lost find thier way. I say thank you for that. I am guilty of not always doing that, I used to and I don't know why I don't anymore, perhaps laziness and that is really a poor excuse and one I should be ashamed to admit... which I am, but I can't be anything but honest here and so I must.
This is a very well thought out acrostic. Many times I read acrostics and I cringe because a lot of times people tend to just list things when they write acrostics and that is just not the way an acrostic is meant to be written. It should tell a story about the words listed along the left hand side and your acrostic does just that and it does so quites smoothly. This is a perfect example of how an acrostic is meant to be written. Very nice write here and it was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest dear.
Suzi
P.S. - Thank you for reminding me of what I should have been doing all along and keep doing what you are doing for as I am a good case to show you that your work is not going unrewarded!
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Thank you
dear poetess & I agree with you wholeheartedly about ppl who don't know the purpose or joy of writing a good acrostic. When I was first introduced to this form I came upon it through a man who didn't write them well. I gave him comments on how I thought it could be written & now he's improved immensely. I cringe at a lot of Acrostics also. This is one of my fav forms as when I'm inspired with a title then Father guides me in the rest as well! I'm an inspired writer since about age 7 & I claim no glory for that as it's a gift He gave me that I've much joy in relinquishing myself to. I'm a Music Minister/Singer Songwriter/Poet & I'm bound to declare Him, so I almost always have His word in my AN since He's the Author & I'm a scribe. Your words of encouragement are well received as I know that many don't even bother to read the AN. There's no loss in any of this 'cause I'm serving Him & doing my Bible Study at the same time!
Blessings to you dear one. I'm so pleased to know you read His word & will begin to again post it.
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AMEN! That's all I can say to this one!
Keep on writing!
Annie
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Thanks
for being my first reader Ann!
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