moon gives a cheesy smile
breaks through stormy clouds
light miraculously shines life
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***Photo Credit/link*** http://www.studiopress.com/demo/blackcanvas/images/moon.png
A contest entry
- Guiding Light #3 by Dreamer With Dreams.
850 points, ended July 8, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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this beautiful
brought a smile to my face i love it
"moon gives a cheesy smile
breaks through stormy clouds
light miraculously shines life" -
This is an awesome poem. I like the way you went with the prompt. It does look like the moon gives a cheesy smile. I enjoyed the read!!!
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
Oh my!
The nights I have seen sights like this and dreamed sweet and happy dreams!!!
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I like how you incorporated the picture into your poem. Good job, thanks for entering, and good luck in my contest!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker Who Lost All -
I loved the title
Great take on the prompt picture, light and interesting poem. All the best in the contest.
Cyber hugs,
Your GMA
Cheryl
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Excellent form sweetie!
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Nothing like a moon with a cheesy smile...put a smile on my face too...in so few words very uplifting...beautiful!
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the light shines
with a smile and her face
I see in my heart high in my sight
Hugs love this is beautiful
your G Angel♥
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imagery was beautiful. the picture is dark but pretty at the same time. good luck in the contest!
Dax
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Fun to read and imagine... I especially like nature poems! Good job!
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That was amazingly cute. You did a great job in portraying the moon as something positive rather then dark. Good luck in the contest,love.
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Cheesy smile...good way to think of the moon, smiling down as the regal light of the night. Very nicely expressed.
Write On!
Dennis
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