Giveing up smokeing
Is a hard thing to do
I know its not easy
But its good for you
I ask only one thing
A small favor if you will
Stop snapping at me!!
Just chill!
A simple "Hello"
Is responded with "WHAT"
Bite my head off for nothing
give mannars a shot!
I love you
I suport you
But PLESE
just shut up!!
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Yeah ok mums quiting smokeing and i fully suport her for that
but she is drving me NUTS
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that's great that she's giving up; smoking is so dangerous, and i just wish - well it's like wishing for world peace isn't it. wishing her the best of luck, fingers crossed she'll stay strong!
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smoking real bad thing
well smoking is a very bad thing.
you should correct the spellings of smoking in your poem.
Otherwise the poem is good and you asked your mom to leave such a bad thing , she should thank u.
any ways good job.
keep writing
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smoking linked manners and emotions..well done emo girl..you really know how to snap back...lol..this was an excelelnt piece and i loved it sow ell that i read it twice.I have something that supports your view on my page.Do visit me and read me dear. -
yea I know what you mean, people get so short tempered when their giving up smoking, bu it's great that you support her. I like the way you used rhyme in your poem. Well done!
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I Love this. I have people in my life who are like this but they dont smoke
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