Lightning strikes or so it seems
The darkened sky of or broken dreams
Once so happy and carefreee
Used to define you and me
But now the times have changed
And thought have been rearranged
As we reflect on
Our broken dreams
Of someting worth our while
Some of teh only tings that makes us smile
And while so much makes us cry
While we already feel the need to die
Fall into its embrace
Of sleep, scant to show its face.
Broken dreams, I believed
Were gone and dead
A book on the shelf
Never to be reread
But we where decieved
Crushed and broken in out dreams
We knew a time where happiness
Was all we knew
And never did we think
Were we would reside
In a place where everyone has died
In a place of broken dreams.
Now, shall you comment on my poem that shall have deeper meaning than that of anything Poe himself has written? Haha jk
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And never did we think
Were we would reside
In a place where everyone has died
In a place of broken dreams. <--- i love this bit
I really loved this poem and it is really well written.
An amazing read and i really loved it. Great job and i loved the rhyme in the top part of this.
Really great !
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