the bald man with the camera says:
'try and look a bit more torn forlorn
for all those ugly schoolgirls to project
upon you
their ideal bourgeois middle-class
superficial rebellion'
but all i can think about is how much of an idiot i look,
with my loony clown-face,
and how much i need a wee.
A contest entry
- Dark Picture Prompt - 18 years old and under ONLY by annother.
700 points, ended July 20, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A very intriguing take on the prompt. Best of luck.
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silly me for asking but what is a wee? and i love the way you write i really feel like i step into your poems very well done for the picture good luck in the contest
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their ideal bourgeois middle-class
superficial rebellion
- Love those lines.
Best of luck in the contest.
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