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Shades of Love

Missing image
Wind spirit dancing in shades of mystic Aquarius
guiding followers to astrological passions
you left me in moonlight crying crystal tears..

Author notes

prompt: 3 lines

A contest entry

can you feel her loneiness?

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  • meena krish
    July 7

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    I like the mood you have created here. Felt like a
    medival world of knights & maiden..enjoyed the
    read. Best of luck


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    July 6

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    You don't need an apostrophe for followers. I like the wording. Good job, thanks for entering, and good luck in my contest!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker Who Lost All


  • crivanea silver member
    July 5

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    I really like the first two lines.. Love the message of the last line.. But not sure about the "crying crystal tears" seems a bit much? Just a suggestion but I do love this.. U did a good job with the imagery.. Best of of luck in the contest

  • J Macabre gold member
    July 5
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    Beautiful.