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Nature's Spirit

From rainbows arc across celestial skies
To life’s rebirth and all that she supplies
From cosmic heavens filled with fiery stars
So many galaxies, beyond our Sun and Mars

From heaving heavy oceans deep and wide
That ebb and flow with every changing tide
To sandy deserts filled with shifting dune
And shimmering mirages in the blazing noon

From verdant forests deep and damp with rains
To rocky hilltops down to grassy plains
And rivers as they wind and weave and snake
To find their way into a blue and sparkling lake

All earth’s creatures wild and truly free
Nature’s spirit that provides for all to see
Embodied in perfect sync and rhyme
Nature’s soul so full and so sublime

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  • Beautiful!

    and I like how you began with rainbows

    Thank you for sharing your poem


  • Tqop
    July 5
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    Very good rythm. I loved it.