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TIl Death Do Us Part

The bats swarm all around
On his knees, he drops to the ground
They can hardle stand upright
But, why are they uptight?
When the dawn makes its first ligt
"Til death do us part"
Their secretly spoken bond
Whispered on their ghostly lips
She kneels beside him
Waiting for the time
Why does it have to be so grim?
Even as thelights grow dim.
"Til death do us part"
A melody, a harp, there own little hymn
Black all around them
To be damned, tobe condemned
To their endless misery
Until death did them  part.

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