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Cybermen Rhyme.

 

 

I scratch my head with a wonderful linger
as this syllable count defies my finger.
Then eureka bound, my mind cries ... Oh wonder !
Eleven ? That's right ! No more stupid blunder
I strut for a moment but then stare aghast
a feminine rhyme? Now my brain is surpassed.
Isn't that sexist my verse now one gender ?
I shall sip my scotch on a mind numbed bender.
Poems named Mary or poems named Daisy
I think I'll give up for I'm far too lazy.
Tell me what's next, verses written in numbers
and cybermen rhyme as Shakespeare slumbers.
I will wander along with thoughts of summer
my rhyming sucks and this poems a bummer.

 

 

 

Author notes

Feminine rhyme

I have little idea what I'm doing but I like trying new things.

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 25

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    Very far from a bummer and a great fun exploration of something that is clearly new for you

    Thank-you for a strong entry that made me grin from beginning to end.


    Jeff


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    July 6

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    I thought this was top notch, loved it, very enchanting piece that just grabbed my sense of humor. Hugs, Bunny


  • DesolatELifE
    July 6
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    Hehe, that's one of the nicest bummers I've read for a while =]


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    July 5

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    Ha! Brilliant. I love this. You did a fantastic job on the prompt and superb rhyming!
    Best of luck in the contest.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~