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Broken Hearted

He cried in the corner, of his little dark room
He began falling into the blackness of his doom
He held the broken glass to his arm
just because he felt he had to self-harm

the blood dripped down on to his floor
because he didn't want to be alive anymore
he threw the glass away, and fell into black
as he awoke, it all came rushing back

he bled, and felt so lost once more
and knew there was only one door
he had to die, for other people to live
And he never wanted to revive

his death would bring a better life
so he pulled out a small knife
made his fingers bleed
then he wrote in his blood "I want to be freed!

he sat in the dark, reeling in pain
and he knew this was the wrong lane
she had broke his heart and battered his soul
the evil b***h had completed her goal

he was dying inside and out
and all he felt was doubt
he was falling apart
with his broken and shattered heart

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this is a poem explaining how I really feel

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  • XXWolfOfInsanityXx
    July 5

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    Awe, so much sadness and pain. I know the feeling all to well. I can relate to how you feel. I am sorry you had to go through with this pain. I don't think you're not worth living for. I think you're worth living for. It's her lost not yours. She just did a stupid mistake. That she will regret later. ^^ don't worry you'll find someone I know it. :] I love the rhyme and flow of the poem. You express yourself so beautiful. I felt the pain and sorrow as I read on. It made me shed a few times. It reminds me of how I feel. Don't worry my heart broken too and I love the style of the write.

    - Maria ♥

  • xXDemonxKissXx
    July 5

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    anger, fear, pain, doubt.......so much emotion i love it! so sad thou. im really srry for wut happened


  • Fallen-Thumper
    July 5

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    this is really sad and i can see how you feel. a great way to let it. she is evil for what she did.
    a great poem and i loved it. amazing!!


  • lukes.lover
    July 5

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    omg this is soooooo sad!i know exacly what that feels like and it feels like hell.im so sorry it happened to u. this shouldnt ever happen to anyone... im so sorry
    ...this is one of the best poems ive read. i love it so much!