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Blue




You ate the moon in one big blue bite

and sucked off its lemonade band.

A harpist strung a tune inspired by the night.

 

 

 

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  • awannabepoet
    July 8

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    Your pen is unique Emmyb, I am very happy to have clicked your little name on that right hand peak of my mouse.

    Another splendind set of poetic verse this certainly is.


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    July 6

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    This is different from my other entries. It stands alone on it's own. Well done, thanks for entering, and good luck in my contest!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker Who Lost All


  • TheLyricsArePoetry gold member
    July 6

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    what a sweet little moon . another unique and gorgeous write. best of luck in the contest xx

  • Macsword
    July 6
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    OOH! Like this muchly...


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    July 5
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    VERY poetic and oh so sweet.


  • DolceVito gold member
    July 5
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    Short and sweet; that's amore


  • crivanea silver member
    July 5

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    Ohhhhh! Love it! The ending is perfect but I like every line.. Def an attention grabber.. Great Ahha moment.. Like a great haiku... Best of luck in the contest

  • Rowan gold member
    July 5

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    I don't know why em, but every time I read 'harpist' my mind went to harpy... lol.
    Blue it seriously is though, good job.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    July 5

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    Wow. This is very interesting. I love the imagery you used in this. My favorite part was "lemonade band." I've never looked at the moon like that before, and I'm sure I'll never look at it the same again, always have a memory of a taste of lemons in my mouth.
    Best of luck in the contest.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

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