If you asked me
To change every little thing about me
I’d do it in an instant
As long as I knew
That you’d always be there
I’d stand in front of the world
And I’d shout to the rooftops
About the way you make me feel
I’d make sure everyone knew
That you mesmerise me
With that look
You always give me
I’m sorry for the times
I’ve broken your heart
I don’t even have a reason
For the pain I’ve caused you
I wish I could travel back in time
And leave us together
Because I’ll never forget about you
I have no idea about the way you feel for me
But I wish
You’d give me one last chance
So I can prove
That we’re meant to be
My heart’s tearing apart
Because I long for you
Every waking minute.
A contest entry
- I Don't Move On by Dead Hair.
575 points, ended July 19, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Came here to return the favour
Good luck in the contest - very well written poem - beautiful from the heart write - keep on keeping on - Joe - dobar dan -------------------------------- peace
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corr,the contest ended in july. =] haha.
thank you for your sweet words though.
xx
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Yes, I can feel how you haven't moved on in this poem. Emotions are well expressed, and the read left me with sadness for all the misunderstandings that get in the way of love.
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I could definitely feel the emotion in this one. Very appropriate (in terms of the contest)
Well done!
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"I have no idea about the way you feel for me
But I wish
You'd give me one last chance"
Probably some of the best line breaks I've seen on AP. This is great!
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thank you, it means a lot.
x
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