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Silent Satellite

Face of stone,
mask of bone,
silent satellite - all alone.

A contest entry

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  • myrataal silver member
    July 11

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    I wonder if there is ...

    an ALL ALONE in this entire universe anymore with all these shuttles and satellites drifting in orbit!

    Neatly done.
    Love
    Myra


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    July 7
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    Nicely crafted!


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    July 6

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    You earned brownie points with the rhyming. That has no effect in the contest lol, but I like it. Well done, thanks for entering, and good luck in my contest!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker Who Lost All


  • Keith
    July 5
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    Though you see
    I'm alone as can be
    Once some fellows walked on me

  • Bob Fox
    July 5
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    Bill

    And the Moon smiles down on you...But is it really an empty shell? Ping....

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