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Night’s Pearl

Timeless pearl hanging in the night sky
casting a glow that inspires poets and dreamers
making lovers and lunatics out of sleeping hearts.

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Three lines about the moon

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  • SteveS gold member
    July 10
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    Yes, that sums up the impact of the moon quite well. Great job.

  • Yep the moon does stir the hearts as well as
    inspires us to do many things! Liked the read..
    Best of luck!


  • crivanea silver member
    July 5

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    Awwww! So adorable! Full of timeless classics.. Each line is perfection itself.. Great job! Always love reading your work. Best of luck in the contest

  • *sighs* Beautiful

    I love the last line it really ties everything together,
    I'm jealous you can say so much with so little wording XD

    x

  • It really does inspire poets and dreamers!!! I would know. I love that about it! Well penned, thanks for entering, and good luck in my contest!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker Who Lost All


  • Tqop
    July 5
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    Awe...
    I picture a cartoon moon yawning.

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