I find beauty in the darkest place
in Luna's midnight glow.
I find beauty in the coldest place
in mounds of pure white snow.
I find beauty in the dingy cave
and the flight of a million bats.
I find beauty in a kitten's eyes
and the meows of content cats.
I find beauty in nature's perfection,
I find beauty in Mother Earth.
I find beauty in the love of family,
I find beauty in a child's birth.
I find beauty in life itself,
and I find beauty in death.
When I open my eyes I see something beautiful
there's perfection to be found in every breath.
Author notes
I tried. 
A contest entry
- something beautiful by pineapple-eyes.
550 points, ended July 5, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prewrites by Ami.
550 points, ended July 12, 124 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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you can even make beautiful poetry that doesnt have to do with death and darkness. you amaze me every day mistress.
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This is a great poem and the rhyme and flow worked well. You are right! Anyone can find beauty in anything if they look for it and appreciate it.
After the weekend I've just had, beauty in nature and even beauty in explosion (fireworks) are great things. There are so many things for people to look to. The only true aniwers we have. They don't punish, they don't reward, they just are and nothing more.
Good write.
BC.
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