If love were on fire like this city,
i'd dive off this cliff to save her,
it is not, since this is so,
ill let the flames degrade her,
I see her house a mile away,
I wish her luck with spite,
if she dies, ill forever remember,
what happened on moonless night.
Author notes
This poem is the thought of an angry X lover.
standing at the cliff, watching the city burn.
A contest entry
- Begin and End by crivanea.
400 points, ended July 9, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great job of conveying the message. Great write!
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wow...I didn't need the note to catch the tone/message of this poem..you did a great job in such a short poem to convey a creative take on the prompt..lovely write!
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Your words do such a better job than the picture does. I'm impressed, such amazing words. Best of luck in the contest.
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oh this one is pasented cause the way you said you would jump off the cliff for her is so amszing i love it
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yea, my mind wuz kinda stuck on this picture, the thought came about after ice coffee and a cigg. Thanks for the comment
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