It's a different version of the same old song
A saga about how me and my old lady just couldn't get along
Please wont you write me a new story line
Somethin' about me the old lady gettin' along just fine
I don't want no more D.I.V.O.R.C.E.
Or no judge tellin' me how it's goin' be
Perhaps a brand new trailer in an up scale park
With a dog so happy he don't ever bark
It's a different version of the same old song
A saga about how he and the old lady just couldn't get along
Please wont you write me a new story line
Somethin' about me the old lady gettin' along just fine
I want a lot more L.O.V.I.N.G
And how me and the old lady will live happily
A lot more sugar and a lot less fight
And confirmation on how whiskey makes everything right
REPEAT (ALL 4 VERSES 8 TIMES)
Author notes
Just havin' a little fun!!!!!
A contest entry
- Country Lyrics by poets whisper.
650 points, ended July 14, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like this. I have music playing in my head for this.
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The verses are good but isn't eight a bit much? How 'bout picking out one verse and repeating that every now and then as the chorus? Thank you for entering the contest.
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Yep, this little song certainly had something to say. There are a lot of songs about those who don't get along, but when you do comne across one where they do, it is a rare thing and one which is remembered so. I loved this, kinda makes one hum a tune to the words. I wish you the best in the contest and thanks for the read.
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ROFL!!! Too cute...and I am not too sure bout the whiskey part either! ha ha Good read! I like how you always come up with some goofball poem This made me smile!
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