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Ballerina alone

Oh ballerina alone,
With your arched feet and pointed toes.
With your blue eyes and pointed nose.

Oh ballerina alone.
With your smiling mouth and small ears.
With your peace of mind and simple fears.

Oh ballerina alone.
There's a tulip on your table peering at your face.
Beautiful in it's simple crystal vase.

Oh ballerina alone.
All alone in your home.
Where nobody is know.
Until you step out in the sun.

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  • Hope Angel silver member
    July 11
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    I like how you kept repeating "oh ballerina alone" at each stanza. Thank you for entering