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Heated Passion

In the still of the evening
Without sunlight to intrude
I see the twilight's in your eyes
As the moon sets up the mood

Playing music soft and low
While romance fills the air
I can't help but feel aroused
The very moment you come near

You submit to my embrace
While candles flick their flame
And the smell of sweet perfume
Seems to drive my lust insane

As I look into your eyes
And run my fingers through your hair
I taste the sweetness of your neck
As I nibble at your ear

I then whisper words of love
As you answer with a sigh
And in a very sexy way
Your sweet body comes alive

Your the heat of my desire
As we slowly come undress
I then start to lay you down
While you welcome my caress

With your luscious sexy curves
You have a taste I can't resist
And your breast show some response
When I touch them with a kiss

As I soak inside your love
To a sexy love condition
Feeling passions start to rise
While making love in all positions

You give me so much pleasure
For ecstasy is here
With you wrapped inside my arms
To this heated love we share

Now no one can come close
To this love that we inspire
For only you can fill this joy
And the heat of my desire

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  • Jaded Lily gold member
    July 9

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    Nice job on this one! Perhaps you should also place it under Adult or Erotica just to be safe so younger kids don't have access to this. Just a thought. You have written one of the most erotic pieces I've read in a while and with the few typo's fixed this could be a fine piece of work!! Your flow and line structure was right on and your spelling, except for the couple of typos, was excellent. You showed us a wonderful look into love and loving. Thanks for entering my contest and always!
    Lily ♥


  • RebeccaMaria
    July 5
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    wow, cody you make me lost for words.


  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    July 5

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    very nice...you are wise beyond your years...no wonder you write...it has to come out somewhere. this site is an awesome place to spread your wings...great job!
    Kendal