Sometimes I feel I'm on a boat,
Floating far away..
But then my boat is tied to a pole,
Urging me to stay..
Stay and face the future,
Stay and face the past..
But I want to set sail again,
So I open up the mast..
I untie the sturdy rope,
For a journey out to a vacant sea..
A journey of peace and quiet,
A journey just with me..
But nightmares come,
While reflections float by,
I realize I'm in trouble,
I have to break away and try..
Try to get back,
So my family can find me,
Back to the world,
I don’t need to flee!
No more dreaming,
No more missing you,
I want to get better,
That's all I want to do..
But now I'm trapped,
I can't get back,
I watch my world,
Fade to black…
Author notes
hope its good princess ^_^
A contest entry
- PAINT IT BLACK! by PrInCeSsOfRoCk.
1150 points, ended July 19, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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*cough* told ya i cant help giving you something
i dont care if this judge is getting emotions in the way hehe. i cant not give you anything coz everything you write is special to me 
*steals you away to give you your extra prize*
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* blush * im only in it for the extra prize hehehehe
thanks a million babes..
love ya to bits
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hehe thats no secret to me babes hehe (its my fave part of having contests but ssshhhh)
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Just to add to this, the sea is a dark place at night, this is good at explaining troubled emotions. Well written. Blessings.
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lovely reflections, beautiful to read
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I have felt the same--fading to black, but thank GOD it passed. It is a dangerous place to be where even decision making is affected,
A very good, enlightened write.
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I agree with you Drifter.. Being in a dark and black place is frustrating.. I hope i can pull myself out from this chilling state like you did asap
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oh yea duh i forgot...you may wanna have a look at your title baby...hehe i dont think balck is a word
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as always my dear....a great write. one that i can relate to so much specially right now. so glad you decided to enter my lil contest
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Of course i'd enter ur fab contest how could i not?! It took me a while to write what i did , lately everything i write sounds depressing ) :
I must have filled the rubish hun with papers till i said to meself "vonnie dont think just let it flow and it will be good for foxy's contest" hehe so i'm glad it was ok baby.. And i fixed the title
my head isnt on right these days...
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thats ok...everything i write is depressing at the moment so i dont mind reading it. well it flowed good baby its okay anyone can make silly mistakes, dont worry i dont think my head is on at all at the moment...
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Self reflection
balance..
Well done on imagery
Excellent as alawys
Thanks for the share
Darky
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Thank you sweetie for your comment it means a lot as always ^_^
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