Laughing five playing (Haiku chain w/rhyme)

Laughing five playing,
four spotted frogs and one hare;
Mosquito attacks!

Abruptly wakened,
curiosity, eyes stare;
Dragonfly, zoom, zoom!

As the sun rises,
samurai warrior says prayer;
Hop, hop, hop, hop, splash!

Waters edge rippled,
four circles twirl over there;
Frog looks like rabbit?

Scratching head, pondered,
a dream, or an odd affair?
Running for the hills!

Not enough Sake,
tell no one of this I swear;
Frogs, rabbit laughing!

Author notes

prompt picture..a mix of Haiku, humor and rhyme http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2452/435.jpg?1246802083

A contest entry

Fujiwara period by Violinstrings. 650 points, ended July 19, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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jasminerose
July 23
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lol What a great piece with a very playful way to write a haiku chain!!
Gave me some giggles... especially the... not enough sake lol
Excellent as always Ken.. and it's good to see you penning every blue moon or so...
Congratulations on your award!
Linda
Violinstrings
July 5

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this is a good job
thanks for entering please pass on this contest to your favorites, the rhyme scheme is well done
- InBetweenThoughts
  July 12
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  Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, glad you enjoyed this. Have a beautiful day, Ken IBT
Lady Dragonwyck
July 5

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Not enough Sake!!!! Love that.......
This is too too cute!!! You will captured the moments.

Lady D
- InBetweenThoughts
  July 5
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  LOL, Good morning Lady D, saw this contest last night and the pic amused me so I thought Haiku...lol..Glad you enjoyed! Thank you for your comments and applauses, very much appreciated, Ken IBT