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Laughing five playing (Haiku chain w/rhyme)

Laughing five playing,
four spotted frogs and one hare;
Mosquito attacks!

Abruptly wakened,
curiosity, eyes stare;
Dragonfly, zoom, zoom!

As the sun rises,
samurai warrior says prayer;
Hop, hop, hop, hop, splash!

Waters edge rippled,
four circles twirl over there;
Frog looks like rabbit?

Scratching head, pondered,
a dream, or an odd affair?
Running for the hills!

Not enough Sake,
tell no one of this I swear;
Frogs, rabbit laughing!

 

 

 

 

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prompt picture..a mix of Haiku, humor and rhyme http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2452/435.jpg?1246802083

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  • jasminerose
    July 23
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    lol What a great piece with a very playful way to write a haiku chain!!
    Gave me some giggles... especially the... not enough sake lol
    Excellent as always Ken.. and it's good to see you penning every blue moon or so...
    Congratulations on your award!
    Linda

  • this is a good job
    thanks for entering please pass on this contest to your favorites, the rhyme scheme is well done

    • Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, glad you enjoyed this. Have a beautiful day, Ken IBT

  • Not enough Sake!!!! Love that.......
    This is too too cute!!! You will captured the moments.

    Lady D

    • LOL, Good morning Lady D, saw this contest last night and the pic amused me so I thought Haiku...lol..Glad you enjoyed! Thank you for your comments and applauses, very much appreciated, Ken IBT

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