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Sometimes

Sometimes it seems, as if life would like to draw attention to us,
just because of the fact, that we are still alive!

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  • aestival
    July 16
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    short, but interesting... especially as an entry for this contest. very true, though!


  • ButILoveHer silver member
    July 7
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    So intensly true .. I totally agree with your short but eye catching poem ..

    Vonnie