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Rolling Stone

"I m like a rolling stone in a rolls royce,hearing loud voices from the outside, but the noise is just about what amount you can spare for getting more."

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  • i like, too

    i actually never know, if things sound right:-), cause my main language is german, but mostly i just say: hey, just cause u dont say that in english doesnt mean its wrong!

  • mmm... very interesting. I like this!


    Short but sweet.


    Well done finalist in the competition!