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Leading With Your Lone Guitar

I’m sent back to your repertoire; an urge I can't describe
Want to read about your lyrics yes read all about your life
You are dreaming  deep within my soul; more than words beyond transcribe
I would love to hide within your heart while roaming in your eyes

Your tender touch within my thoughts
I am your music's soul
You are leading with your lone guitar
I am feeling free and whole         

Just another dreamer
Upon your path I know
But my sorrow turns to laughter
More than words I feel to show

I am sure there is a place we all may one day call our own
But right now I am drifting on life's ocean all alone
For a moment you're my harbor; I am anchored by your smile
Your soul becomes eternity;  your heart my spirit's guide

Your tender touch within my thoughts
I am your music's soul
You are leading with your lone guitar
I am feeling free and whole                                     

Just another dreamer
Upon your path I know
But my sorrow turns to laughter
More than words I feel to show


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More than Words by Extreme

This is a version I adapt especially for your contest. Hope you love it.

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  • this is amazing! I'm reminded of John Keats. anyway great job and great metaphors!!!!


    • myrataal silver member
      July 25
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      Thank you so much ...

      for the Gold. I truly enjoyed entering.
      Love to you!
      Myra

  • How about More Than Words by Extreme. If you would like a different prompt then please let me know. If not, then good luck and thanks for entering!