Natural leaders, naturally strong,
Searching for glory, searching for fun.
Leading their men through fire and death,
Always working at their best.
Yellow, orange, green and white,
Craving love, day and night.
The sun forever burning bright,
Giving lives love and light.
Graceful and intelligent souls,
Their hearts are full, never cold.
Guided by the sun's bright rays,
Living life to the full, every day.
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Option 3
A contest entry
- July New Member Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended August 6, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is very well done. Your word choice is a perfect enhancement on the leo and its attributes. Great use of punctuation too.
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Good luck!
I encourage you to comment others and generate activity for yourself!
Good job, keep writing and best of luck to you in the contest!
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A lovely write; I know a few Leos and you've certainly nailed them!
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I know a few Leo's and this fits alot of them very well, I think you described the Leo very well, thanks for sharing this with us here and for joining the site, please keep up the writing, and thank you for sharing this with us!
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A nice tribute to Leos. Leo's seem like a proud people from your words here. The poem had nice flow and structure. A good rhythm and nice job with the rhyming.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
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I like this poem, being a Leo I can see much of myself in it
- I think that you might like to look at not capitalising the first letter of every line, when it isn't the start of a new sentence it can interrupt the flow a little - but other than that this was lovely 
well done!
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Thank You for Your Entry
This is a great poem for the Lions of the world, those of the zodiac and those who are honourary Awesome to read
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Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you are having fun reading and writing on this site!
This is a wonderful dedication to the Leos out there...I am a Libra, myself!!! Nice rhythm in this, too!
Blessed Be,
Jeremy
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I love this... I'm an Aquarius myself, but this is a lovely tribute to our Lions out there. Your rhythm was pretty-much spot-on, and while I normally dislike rhyme, I think you did it well. Just don't forget your option # in the author-notes.
Well done & thanks for your entry
Laura
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