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Silve Wings

      Silver wings why do you pass me by?
      Was it all just a horrible felling?
      Was it all just a game for you to play?
      Why Silver wings, do you hate being?
     
      True, I am a dog to many that I know.
      But, Silver wings can't you see my pain?
      I want to be yours, forever now.
      Silver wings, am I being vain?
     
      Why can't you see that I am in love?
      Why can't you accept me, I can't be
      Anyone other than me, Try to believe.
      I just want to understand, why me?
     
      I just want you to hold me now love.
      Silver wings, why can't you believe?

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  • Kira65
    July 5

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    it is a very good write, it has a good flow
    my favorite part is

    I just want you to hold me now love.
    Silver wings, why can't you believe?