Another night, another day lost
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Sugar is sweet
I love you
I watch her sleep
As the rain falls hard
Showering her mind
In little glass shards
Her eyelids flutter
From the touch they saw
Glowing in the night
Blood dripping, so raw
Yet she dreams
Of a white wedding
Holding him close
Was there anyhing she's dreading?
Maybe a last kiss
That fact that he's lost
Never to return
What a fragile cost
Roses ar red
Violets are blue
Her eyes sparkle
Only for you
Author notes
i was thinking about Karl, Edy and Alex at this point, i was also watching Hollie sleep and it is also spur of the mment so its not that good. At Hollies house doing this...my tired baby girl
A contest entry
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kawaii!!!
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It almost feels as if you are watching the dreams of another, as you dream of them, they are dreaming of someone else...
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great poetry, so much love in your words, I could feel it, I think that is lovely
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This was a really sweet poem.
I liked it. Spur of the moment poems
usally are the best.
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aww this is really sweet and loved your prompt. I could tell you really care about someone. One typo though, anyhing should be anything. apart from that though it was ok. Briliant poem. I wish i could make my poems rhyme like you can yet still make them full of meaning.
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thanks..my friends are great to me =P your poems are great the way they are
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ALEX???? explain..........
Good poem. I love the beggining and end of cliche with twist.
Love you hunnie. -
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Alex (hes a sweety) is a guy on AP and well yer (the dummer ive said about him before hun)
love you too hun -
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh the drummer. okies =P good to have things clear.
xxx
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