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Lost in Pain

I crawl in beside you
rest against your back
a silent tear falls
and the demons attack

"he doesn't love you
he never will"
I shiver-
with a sudden chill

tossing and turning
all through the night
with questions
that fill my soul with fright

Every battle
turns to war
but every I love you
has me wanting more

I should have known
this torture would come
I should I have known
to just stay numb

how could I be so STUPID
to let someone in
to let someone take my heart
to only separate it again

all my wounds where healed
my heart did not ache
now I am forced to smile
God, I'm such a fake!

No one knows I'm dying inside


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  • Fantastic!

    This is an awesome write and I can totally relate - thanks for sharing : )


  • mitchybaby
    July 23

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    wow this is so deep! I am so sorry you are feeling so broken hearted! Amazing write, sometimes those broken emotions develope amazing poetry. And you nailed it here. Keep writing